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Last Friday, our school holds① a sports meeting. I went to school earlier than usual. I took part in the Boys’ 100-metre race.
There were six boys in the group. At first, Zhang Hao, a boy from Class 3, ran the fastest. I tried my best but② caught up with him. We were neck and neck. The race was over, and I came out first. The PE teacher told me that I did well at③ the last few seconds. I did my best in the race and I will do my best in everything.
江苏省连云港市赣榆区罗阳中学七（3）班 张倩
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1. 优点：
本文讲述了作者参加体育比赛获得第一名的经历.可贵之处在于,作者在体育比赛中获得了启示：做每件事都要尽力做好.整篇文章文字流畅、用词得当,是一篇不錯的学生习作.
2. 需要修改的地方：
①holds改为held.结合时间状语Last Friday,此处应使用一般过去式形式.
②but改为and.上下文之间是并列关系,不是转折关系.
③at改为in.in搭配时间段,意为“在等时间里”.
3. 评分：
按江苏省连云港市中考英语作文满分25分的评分标准,本文修改前可得23分.
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